Haiku VIII

black hole

  great loss …

     death of a friend

                     ✍🏼 Pheyelow Bashow 

As you already know by now I am a newbie and these rudimentary offerings fall far and away from good haiku. I humbly ask the reader to provide any hints that would result in improvements. Thanks 🙏 😊 

black hole;

    event horizon

        draw an Enso

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death 💀 

   crossing event horizon;

      leaving the living

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black hole

  edge of knowledge 

    death 💀 

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forever changing

   nothing in stillness;

       flowing in time

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change …

  smell flows, sounds 

     flavor of delicious food

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wishes

   fishes; 

     nothing

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happiness;

  reality

     less desire

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life painful 😖 

  sneaks beauty; 

     wonderful moments

   autumnal winds blow

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europa 

  white cloth table;

     biting into tasty flavors

     tickling the palette 

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bonsai 

  symbolism;

    peace harmony 

   human goodness abounds

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gardening

  cleaning rose petals;

     toad 🐸 takes breath suddenly

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The Toad 🐸 

liver bites

  smelly 👃 

    stomach churns

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enso 

  circle ⭕️ of life

    beware event horizon  

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